Are solutions sought by creating a ruckus?
When convolution of thoughts reaches the peak,
I WONDER why simplicity is the most difficult to seek!
How a book ten inches apart,
Can instantaneously put some to sleep,
But music playing four blocks away,
I WONDER, why compels us to tap our feet!
Why can't logic,sense,rationality,
Resist a gush of emotions?
Why do heart and brain fail,
Miserably,I WONDER,at their negotiations!
How each one by default gets trained to tackle,
Anxiety,Stress and Competition shackles?
Yet cannot explain how all those just vanish,
In Mother's lap ,I WONDER,how ultimate solace is achieved!
very nicely put... something very different... out of the ordinary...
ReplyDeletethnx rash..wanted to add more..but as nd wen tym permits!
ReplyDeletevery nice.....
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wow.... this is just superb...u have raised some deep philosophical questions....and that too in simple and sweet verse! Gonna read this multiple times! :)
ReplyDelete@jai..thnx ga!
ReplyDelete@vaidya..dey r just random thoughts..i dnt knw abt philosophy..is it?..but thnx a lot! :)
Beautiful!!! You know how to play with words!! :)
ReplyDeleteWonderful poem!!!! Simply beautiful!! :-))
ReplyDelete@Rishikesh and Shivani
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot for all the appreciation! :)
kickass one... ;)
ReplyDeleteloved it..after a long time.. smethin made me smile from within... seriouslyy..
ReplyDeletevery well put up...
keep up the gud wrkk dear.. :) :)
@jayesh..thnx yaar ;)
ReplyDelete@amrita..thnx a lot!u pamper me a lot :)
gaurav shahane
ReplyDelete"provokes you to wonder
haha..thnx :)
ReplyDeleteFantastic poem...!!
ReplyDeleteYou have really put your thoughts in a different way this time.
I Liked it...
thnx 007!:)
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